Descriptive Writing 27/5/19

Descriptive Writing 27/5/19

L.O Create a piece of writing that describes a place or setting
inspired by your song. 6-8 sentences
My ears were about to explode.The instruments were really loud like
a tigers roar. I started to have butterflies in  my stomach.


As I heard an ASMR sound softly. I felt like I was on a Roller
Coaster.I felt sick that I wanted to get off. Never go back on a
Roller coaster.  

Making Music

                                                    27/5/19 Monday 

Last week in Hurumanu we have been Making Music with Garage Band.

We Had to include 3 instruments,A beginning,Middle,Ending,an ASMR sound and 3 other sounds.

I hope you enjoy listening to my groups music. In my group I had Paige and Shanarnia 
Please comment something Helpful,positive and Thoughtful. 

Here is a link to our video 

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Zx6Ge1W4k2B1_2I6uHDCcXJizbCX2BHq/view

Story about the song happier

It was my birthday I  had tears down my face.  My friends were yelling,screaming and throwing balloons at each other I was so frustrated and sad. Then my dad  came with a birthday cake he put the cake on the table and I closed my eyes and thought of a wish then I opened my eyes and when I started to blow one of my friends Blowed out the candles I was so so frustrated.

 Then my dad gave me a present when I opened the box there was a bright yellow bow I was happy that I had another bow then I put the bow back in the box. My dad left and said wait there and so I waited and he brought out a golden retriever I named him Mello. My eyes lit up and I was so happy I didn't know what to say and then my dad brought out his camera and took a photo of me and my puppy.

 Years passed on and I was in senior school and I got braces. I wanted to decorate a room with yellow Dog stuff for Mello because Yellow was my favourite colour . Every week my dad checked Mello's and my height. And Then Year's later when I was a Teenager. My dad still Checked our Height's.


 And then I went into High School  I was in a soccer team and the coach said two girls got to pick who would be in their team and then the last 2 people which one was me and one was a other girl and the  girl  who got to pick picked  the girl and not me and I was so sad.  and I just was holding onto the ball and I throw the ball up and I was playing with Mello with the ball and practising  my soccer skill's . And then a day after that we had a soccer team photo. And I was in the middle holding the soccer ball. And then other prettier girl's pushed me out of the line. And went in my spot and I had to stand at the back and then the photographer said that I needed to smile with my teeth. And when I opened my mouth A girl standing beside me looked at me and her and other girls made fun of my braces.

And then I ran home sad and when I got home I ran to the couch  and just Layed there and then Mello started scratching on the door and then  I sat up and opened the door and then I sat up on the couch and started smiling at Mello and we put his paw up on my hand and I stood up and tried doing  a trick on Mello and he just layed down on the floor and I looked sad and I cuddled with Mello and then I went to the vet and got medicine for Mello and I was still very upset.

 And then months passed and It was August. And I went into the lounge and Saw Mello laying on the floor and I went to Mello and Called Dad and Dad Came and picked Mello up and we went to the vet again and I started crying. And dad said that he would have to put Mello to sleep and Mello would go to heaven.

And then 20 years later I had A daughter And I was wearing bright yellow clothes and a bandanna. I went into the room where it was my daughters birthday every body was waiting for her to sit down on a chair where the table was she dressed up red her favourite colour she ran to the table and Hugged my dad and she sat down on the chair her Grandad gave her a red box that had a bright red bow she seemed sad and my dad said wait there I have another gift for you and he left the table and my dad bought out a puppy and then when she saw my dad holding the dog her face was so happy and then she started crying happy tears I also started crying happy tears for her it was the best thing I saw and then my daughter grabbed the bow and put it on the dog and then my dad took a photo of her and the dog and I put the photo next to my photo I was so happy for my daughter.