Creative writing
One Beautiful sunny day my owners left to go to a BBQ. When they left I wanted to go on a adventure around the house and outside .
In the House
When I went looking around the house I jumped on a chair and grabbed the home phone and rang my friend Lilly to come over. she said she was busy so she hang up. I went looking around the house again and I found a remote I said to myself what is this thing so I pushed a on and off button and the T.V turned on I watched a movie then I got bored and I said I will go outside.
Outside in the backyard
so I opened the door and I saw a trampoline I decided to go on it so I jumped so high that I landed on a branch of a tree and I got scared so I closed my eyes and jumped down and face planted. So I got so muddy that I wanted to wash the mud off so I found a hose and I turned on it and I was waiting for the water to come and I put it up on my face and the water was so cold that I turned the hose off and climbed up the stairs into the spa.
Here are the shoes I am
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Kia ora Meleana,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your creative writing. You have used some really awesome words in your writing. What do the shoes do when their owners get home? Next time, you could try to and use some different sentence starters.
Keep up the awesome work.
Miss Tozer.